I. Introduction

            The Kennedy center was created in Washington, DC to fulfill President Kennedy’s strong idea in cultural achievement as a critical part of human development. Delete because it is not necessary. It's clutter. Visiting Kennedy center was a learning experience on the performing arts.   Before visiting the Kennedy Center, we assumed that this center reflected the American culture, but instead it is an art place for all nations.  During the tour, we saw flags from various countries, which declared that the Kennedy Center is a place for worldwide gathering and appreciation of art and culture.   The center has two levels; : Use a colon to introduce a list the Foyer main level and the Roof Terrace level.  Delete because it is not clear and not necessary: Due to the center’s broad physical characteristics, Delete - Don't mention yourselves: the writers of this essay mainly focus on the Concert Hall, Opera House, and Millennium Stages. You could write: The most popular stages are the Concert Hall, the Opera House, and the Millennium Stages.

II. Physical Description 

            You don't have a topic sentence. The Concert Hall is DELETE: considered to be the largest performance theater in the Kennedy Center.  The hall has an outstanding sound system and different levels of seats. Delete: The room It is decorated by with 11 crystal chandeliers, which is were a gift given by Norway.  During our visit, we discovered that the concert hall is a home to the national symphony Orchestra. The second largest theater in the Center with fewer seats than the concert hall is the Opera House.  Like the concert hall, the Opera house is decorated by crystal chandelier and four matching candle holders, which was were gifts a gift from Ireland.   Musical arts such as Ballet and Opera are performed in this house. We were told that annual top performers are honored in this place.   The last one is the Millennium Stage.  It has two stages in both Grand Foyer ends. Selected groups from all the 50 states perform in on this stage. Some of these shows performed by the selected groups are open to the public with out any charges.   The idea of the shows being free is to encourage people and introduce them to the performing arts.

Bust of John F. Kennedy in Grand Foyer  

III. Social Description

             Delete: This is not an effective topic sentence. As described above,the John F. Kennedy center for the performing arts is one of the busiest centers with attractive features.  Your topic sentence should say something about people. This is the SOCIAL paragraph. We observed tourists dressed in casual clothes from different states and foreign countries with different age group and gender. During their visit their interaction was mainly based on the center's lovely atmosphere, admiring different activities and of the performer's capacity.  In addition students from different schools of the surrounding areas participated in different event to get understanding of the performing arts and reinforce their classrooms curricula.  We also saw different artists dressed bright and colorful performance clothes.  On top of that employees and volunteers in the Kennedy center were actively helped helping tourist and students by leading the tours of the center's theaters, artworks, by providing information, selling tickets and other several duties.  In general the social interactions have a positive contribution to the physical environment.

IV. Conclusion

      After visiting the John Kennedy Center, we concluded that the center offers various forms of artistical performances for all ages and nationality.  Its outstanding building together with the beautiful chandeliers makes the center a unique monument.  Its social environment equally dominates the lovely physical environment.  Lastly, the nice Roof Terraces offers a great view of the DC surroundings, the Potomac, and neighboring state of Virginia.  Since The Kennedy Center was such a learning experience, we recommend that everyone should visit it. You really don't analyze the connection between the physical and the social. Your concluding paragraph was supposed to offer an analysis.

Kennedy Center across Potomac River