I heard a very interesting story on the radio this morning. It was about a man who decided to walk across the United States from California to Maine. He wanted to draw attention to the need to save energy. He thinks that Americans use to much gas and that we should use our legs and bicycles more frequently. He had ten pairs of shoes in his backpack because he would probably wear out his shoes fairly quickly. He hoped to reach his final destination in about twelve months. I hope he is successful in completing his trip and in rising people’s consciousness.

I heard a very interesting story on the radio this morning. It was about a man who decided to walk across the United States from California to Main. He wanted to draw attention to the need to safe energy. He thinks that Americans use too much gas and that we should use our legs and bicycles more frequently. He had ten pairs of shoes in his backpack because he would probably where out his shoes fairly quickly. He hoped to reach his final destination in about twelve months. I hope he is successful in completing his trip and in rising people’s consciousness.

I think that it is correct.

It is correct.

It is correct. Good to go.

I didn't see no mistakes.

I heard a very interesting story on the radio this morning. It was about a man who decided to walk across the United States from California to Maine. He wanted to draw attention to the needs to save energy. He thinks that Americans use too much gas and that we should use our legs and bicycles more frequently. He had ten pair of shoes in his backpack because he would probably wear out his shoes fairly quickly. He hope to reach his final destination in about twelve months. I hope he is successful in completing his trip and in raising people’s consciousness.

I didn't find any mistakes. Everything seems to be correct.

I didn't find mistakes

I didn't find mistakes.

I heard a very interesting story on the radio this morning. It was about a man who decided to walk across the United States from California to Maine. He wanted to draw attention to the needs to save energy. He thinks that American uses too much gas and that we should use our legs and bicycles more frequently. He had ten pair of shoes in his backpack because he would probably wear out his shoes fairly quickly. He hoped to reach his final destination in about twelve months. I hope he is successful in completing his trip and in raising people’s consciousness.


According to me everything is fine except this, American uses instead of use.

All the mistake have been corrected

its a good letter.

I heard a very interesting story on the radio this morning. It was about a man who decided to walk across the United States from California to Maine. He wanted to draw attention to the needs to save energy. He thinks that American(s) use too much gas and that we should use our legs and bicycles more frequently. He had ten pair(s) of shoes in his backpack because he would probably wear out his shoes fairly quickly (quick). He hoped to reach his final destination in about twelve months. I hope he is successful in completing his trip and in raising people’s consciousness.